Goodbye
Poem by ShadowSummit
Sweeping darkness
And endless plains
Fills me with alertness
Shakes me with shooting pains
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Staying alert
Through the long nights
Dealing with the hurt
Putting up with our fights
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People don’t understand
They don’t hear your words
It’s not splayed out on a newsstand
It’s only me who knows the words
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I’m sick of the abuse
I’m sick of being used
I’m sick of your short fuse
I’m sick of feeling confused
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So I’ll escape tonight
It’s time for me to fly
I’ve got to do what’s right
So this is goodbye
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Read my article:)
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I just did! It’s such a wonderful post. ❤
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I wrote my article,then I found ur post,felt the rush of similar thoughts:)
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I know, how strange that we were both writing about similar things at the same time. 😀
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Its stange.
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Strange
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Hey check the timing,u postd before 35min and mine 34 min
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Haha you are right. XD
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Ur poem told good bye,im telling, not to, wonderful coincidence:)
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Wonderful poem, Shadow Summit.
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Thank you Nightsong! ❤
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That was a deep poem; it was very emotional. Great work!
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Thanks Akaluv. I wrote the first line and the rest sort of just came to me from there. I’m glad there was that emotion there, I like when my writing has that deep emotional level. 🙂
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