Red
Flash Fiction by Shadow Summit
She always wears red. Scarlet silk drapes across her curves and delicately skims the floor. The colour red symbolizes extreme emotions such as love, anger, danger and adventure. She possesses all these characteristics and wears them with pride.
In all of this, above all, she is honest. She doesn’t do things halfheartedly and she won’t try to disguise her true feelings. Her fiery passion is as red as the blood in her veins. Her lover has every drop of her burning love and their romance will continue to burn for all their years.
Adventures with her can take you to watch the ruby sunset or to hang like bats in the trees of an orchard while biting into sweet, shiny red apples. She is a like a red rose amongst a bouquet of pale daisies, for she is bright and unique in any crowd.
Whenever I think of the colour red, all I can see is her.
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will be grateful if you take a look at this: https://feelovibes.wordpress.com/2017/03/03/the-will-to-wait-the-fight-to-last
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I’ve taken a look and have left some feedback, if you wouldn’t mind telling me if you liked my piece of writing I would very much appreciate that. 🙂
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Red is my favorite color, so I really connected with this piece. I didn’t see any mistakes here =)
Awesome job!
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Red is such a rich color, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much, Akaluv! ❤
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This is really good, Shadow Summit! I enjoyed reading it🙂
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Thanks, Nightsong. I’m so glad that you enjoyed reading it. ❤
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I feel that you have described “her”….pretty well
and the passage describes how deeply you know her and how you want to be with her…..
I feel like this….
Nice Work
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Thank you so much for the feedback. 😀
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Hey…would love to have your worthy comments on my latest post https://feelovibes.wordpress.com/2017/04/03/confession-the-want-of-my-love-the-need-of-my-present/
Thank you
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